I got out of the car with all my bags, walked up the stone steps, and rang the doorbell. I immediately recognized that bark of their pet dog that greeted me. A second later, my friend opened the door and invited us in. As soon as I stepped through the door, their dog greeted us vigorously. Their cat was under the living room table, as usual. Everything was so familiar, I was slightly overwhelmed. We exchanged greetings, then went up to my friend's room. The moment I entered the room, I immediately knew I was in for a fun weekend!
Monday, September 5, 2016
This Weekend
"Finally!" I shouted as we pulled up into my friend's driveway. We were in Dallas this weekend to move some items into our house, and we managed to get into contact with one of my closest friends, who moved to Dallas a few years ago. They told me I could have a sleepover, which excited me so much! I haven't seen(or even been in contact with) him in so long, and I was pumped. I was so excited, I was tossing and turning in my bed the whole night. I could not wait to meet their entire family once again, to see how much my friend has changed, and to hear the stories of how they were doing in Dallas.
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I really like how you described your feeling in more than one way. I also liked how you used descriptive words like vigorously to show the exciting feeling.
ReplyDeleteI had the same thing happen to me. I visited my friend in Mississippi and we played basket and video games
ReplyDeleteThe adjectives you used were very descriptive and helped to paint an image in my head.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you gave a lot of detail and how that was a very specific moment.
ReplyDeleteI liked your detail of your feelings in the moment. I also like how your start your story with excitement to pull readers in.
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