My Literacy Narrative

      Recently, we are writing a personal narrative about an important event in our lives. In my case, I chose to write about the time I started playing music. I think that the part that I did well in writing was describing all the events that took place. I tried to be as informative as possible, adding everything that happened that I can remember. Also, I felt like I described the sensation of playing music quite thoroughly.

      The things my essay lacked in was descriptive details. Although I tried to add as much information about my past as I possibly can, I did not include vivid details that would help the reader visualize the scene then and there, but rather only the necessary information needed to understand the series. When I start writing my final draft I will have to make sure to add more descriptive details, and adding dialogues would help the readers imagining the scene that is unfolding.